Just tyring to raise the profile a bit!

http://pistonheads.com/sales/2941848.htm Got - 2017 SDV8 Autobiography in Loire Blue
Had- 2008 TDV8 Vogue SE in Java black
Had - 2007 S/C in Stornoway Grey

No offense meant here, but the pictures in the add are doctored with a visual special effect.
Not showing what the car really looks like is a mistake IMO.
I'd add some real pictures, as they are the first thing a buyer will see and then decide if he likes it.
I'd never buy a car that looked like the sales pictures had been photoshopped, I just wouldn't bother going to view it as a good looking car doesn't need fancy effects.

Basically, the car is not as shown in the pictures.

Fox is spot on there - the pics are good fun but you need to show what you are selling not what you can do with a bit of software.

Buyers want to see a nice tidy well looked after car - that's what they are buying, not the software.

I'd also remove the offers to include things if the selling price is acheived - you know it won't be so it just makes the ad harder to follow - either include them or don't mention them

Thanks for the constructive criticism guys, I've updated things a little and deleted the original ad and resubmitted a new one.

Here's the link http://pistonheads.com/sales/3019520.htm

 Got - 2017 SDV8 Autobiography in Loire Blue
Had- 2008 TDV8 Vogue SE in Java black
Had - 2007 S/C in Stornoway Grey